Friday 4 June 2021

The creepy old lady

                                                           THE CREEPY OLD LADY



 Once upon a time there were 3 girls named Lini, Rickal and Tuku who were walking on a streaky path. They were besties and always went to play out together every single day.  Later that day Rickal said “Look a black cat”.  The cat was so cute that it made us follow it to a black old haunted house. Then Rickal said “aaaa I think we should go back now.'' Then  Lini said “no lets explore this place. After that we all agreed to stay close to each other incase something happens but Rickal had a bad feeling about exploring this place. The first thing we did was go around in circles along the path just to see the door wide open. When we saw it we were shocked and scared.

Next we took one step up the stairs just to hear a door shut inside. We all got so scared that we jumped off the stairs in fright.  Then I took a deep breath and went to five.All of us  felt scared and terrified a As I was doing it, I told my friends to do it so they could stay calm. 

After we all felt ok then we got all our packbag and we got our phone and called our mums and dads and the phone never picked up and then all of us started to scream and then the door opened and  there was an old creepy lady standing right in front of us. My friends were shaking so hard that they ran away which they weren’t allowed to because if they did they would get haunted and get killed. 
Lini went out of the gate and then Rickal went outside just to see the lady right in front of her. The lady grabbed her and started to choke her until she died. Tuku started to cry about her best friend dying in front of her. She wanted to go and save her but I just held her and if she went the lady would do the same thing to her so I knew it was the best for her. She could not breathe and straight away died. I felt sad but I made the right choice to stay and be quiet.     

Then Tuku and Lini went back inside and  went into this old rusty room and we hid in the small cupboard full of skeletons. Lini told Tuku to be quiet because she was too loud when she was breathing. After that we heard footsteps coming upstairs, Tuku was scared so I told her to hold her breath until she went back outside. After that the lady opened the door and said “Come out , come out  wherever you are and then Tuku went out of the cupboard and then the lady said BOO! I FOUND YOU with a deep voice. Then the lady opened the cupboard and then Tuku got scared and the lady took Tuku from the old lady. Lini screamed but she was still staying quiet. Later then the lady  went outside acting like nothing happened and the lady was never seen again.  Lini was happy that she served but sad because her  friend died. When Lini went to her friend’s funeral she said her last goodbyes then  went home crying and wished Them  a safe place in heaven.




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